How does your media product represent a particular social group?
Please click the link below for a voki, which will answer part of this question.
http://www.voki.com/pickup.php?scid=9733393&height=133&width=100
Throughout the magazine I may have used what seems as aggressive language but only due to the text, you will see the example in the image below, it says this year is ours in red text with a horror type of font.
There is a downside to the fact I haven't used slang or cursing within my language throughout the magazine, this is because with the slang and swearing I feel it would appeal a lot more to the targeted audience, but on the other hand without the slang and swearing I would have a wider range of audience.
Here is a link showing why I think swearing should of been in the magazine, this is another clip off the band Slipknot, the way Corey Taylor (The lead singer) Swears at the audience during the song is the way a lot of bands speak to their audience, which is why I feel like swearing and slang language would suit my media product.
Sorry you can not see the video on my blog, if you will, please copy and past the following link in to your search bar, Sorry for any inconvenience.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l4jXzmsP4dw
Please look at the blogs of others as you can see that those who have done substantially more are being asked to do corrections. I suggest you look at the feedback given and do a lot of work to make sure there is work here for me to mark on Monday. I have spent a whole day of my weekend to give you feedback, the least you could have done was meet the deadline, which was last Monday.
ReplyDeleteAre you joking Michael? Where is your completed article? Where is the rest of your evaluation? You are cutting it too fine AGAIN! Yours will be called for as it is a resubmission...I can almost guarantee it. You need to get your backside in gear if you think you are going to pass.
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